Wednesday, 22 April 2015
Complex Sentences
WALT write complex sentences by using subordinating conjunctions.
1. I land safely on my feet and bow to the crowd with relief.
2. I land safely on my feet and bow to the crowd with relief as I think of how proud I am of myself.
1. Tomorrow we are having an ANZAC memorial service at school.
2. Tomorrow we are having an ANZAC memorial service at school although it is not ANZAC Day we shall still remember them.
1. We are in the ALL writing group.
2. We are in the ALL writing group so that we can improve our writing.
Monday, 20 April 2015
Break Dance Moment
Boom! Boom! Loud, blasting music vibrating beneath the ground. With extreme pain in my body my muscles have just enough power to lift my heavy frame off the cold, wooden floor to perform my final move. I power my legs up in mid-air then I push off with all the force that I have. I land safely on my feet and bow to the crowd with relief.
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)