The  mountain walk

I see the huge snowy landscape spreading across the county. Tiny bits of glittery snow blow with the air stream across the land. I feel the gentle air swerve past my cold nippy face. I struggle up this ice capped mountain. As I feel  the extremely cold snow melt into my boots a shiver moves up my spine. I  feel a chilly breeze  blow into my my ear. We a near the finish. I can't wait to get out of this icebox.   

Complex Sentences

WALT write complex sentences by using subordinating conjunctions. 1. I land safely on my feet and bow to the crowd with relief. 2. I land safely on my feet and bow to the crowd with relief as I think of how proud I am of myself. 1. Tomorrow we are having an ANZAC memorial service at school. 2. Tomorrow we are having an ANZAC memorial service at school although it is not ANZAC Day we shall still remember them. 1. We are in the ALL writing group. 2. We are in the ALL writing group so that we can improve our writing.

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Break Dance Moment

Boom! Boom! Loud, blasting music vibrating beneath the ground. With extreme pain in my body my muscles have just enough power to lift my heavy frame off the cold, wooden floor to perform my final move. I power my legs up in mid-air then I push off with all the force that I have. I land safely on my feet and bow to the crowd with relief.

Digital Mihi

Creating a digital mihi creating a connection. (vpld) from Catriona Pene

Wow, this is stunning. Loud, pumping carnival music that can be heard from a mile away. Big, glowing beams of lights flashing in the sky. This is mind boggling. It's like I am in my own world. It's ginormous, big, bulky carts hitting into each other like they're in an arena fighting to the death. Big airy boats bumping like crashing balloons bouncing off each other. Big, vivid, orange lights glow in the sky on the carnival wheel. I can smell candy floss and lots of carnival food. This Is a busy fun fair with at least one thousand people in one fun fair. Everyone shuffling noisely, enjoying the excitement of everything.